Monday, 8 April 2013

Second Draft:

One day there is a family that was having maluration.
There is a boy in that family,who is searching for wheat or any food to feed his mom.His mom is having malnurition in Somolia.

Everytime the son is hungry the mother always gave some propotion of her food.Then one day she got that sickness. They need to find the antedope for that sickness in a camp hospital.The mom said that if she died he have to give it to another people having that same type of sickness.Then the boy went out to find it.

It was miles until evening he rested at a place and found chickens! So he too one and cook it since there was wood to burn.At the morning he saw a truck driver."Hey,please stop!" said the boy.
The truck stoped and hhe got inside."What got you so far?"Asked the driver.
"My mom,she is having malnutriton and I have to get to the camp hospital." The boy said.


They talked until they reached to the hospital. Then the boy ran off and quickly asked the doctor.
"Doctor,is there any antedope for malnutrition?"He said.
"yes,here".said the doctor as he pulls the antedope from his bag.
Then the boy got back to the truk and they got back home.The truck driver was very kind and helpful.

When they got back home,the mom passed away.And he read the letter saying 'Son,its my time to die.Thankyou for every thing...' Then as he cried reading it he gave the antedopeit to his camp mate That is also having the similar sickness nar him.




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