The bike was placed on a port,there was building's near by.The Place was not a dirty place or just normal port.It was clean and white near by. The bulding's were on a unique shape and its full of glass.

And the bike was put on the perfect place. The tiles on the bottom,just perfect,clean,and white.

  The bike was positioned sideways but half of it. I was standing at the side of the front wheel. Then as  

I saw the handle bar that is not a normal handle bar but more like a road bike style handle bar. This bike was a Mclaren special edition of 'Specialized'. \

  When Go a bit near it,it really look expensive and really sporty. Then if you see it from far distance it looks still great.Then when you got there and tried the bike,You will feel tall and feel that the bike was really light.

  Then,if you tried the seats,its not comfortable but its made for you to race. If you are riding for miles

its really tyreing. But you could change it to make more comfortable,but think about the shape. look

at the wheels 'ZIPP' products,carbon fibre so its light.The bike was really nice to ride on and all the frame works looks great.

  

The Final draft of the malnutrition sickness

There is a boy who is living on a poor family on Somolia. There was only two people left since the father died because he worked too hard with a little payment of money,he had a  faminim sickness and he passed away.On that tent was a sad and dark place.

It was on a dry summer,and the mom is getting worse everyday until she got the final sickness which is malnutrition.The son is working hard to get him and his mom a food to eat.If they got a few the mother will give the son more food,but the son always refuse it since the mother is having malnutrition.

"Ma,how long should you suffer this sickness?"

"I can't get more food ma,what are we going to do?",said the son.

"well,you get me a medicine but if you dont make it and I will die,i'm sorry son"

"And it takes hours to walk there,but if you get a transportation well better",said the mom

"i'll try my best ma",said the son.

After a week the son saw the mom getting even worse,he worried so he went out searching for it..

  He went for miles,hours and he came to a thought that he should go back,but no.Because his mother is dying he'll do everything for her.So then he stoped.. He founded some chickens and a wood at that desert. He cooked the chicken and he rested for the night.On the morning,he saw a truck driver luckly!

"Hey,sir please stop!"

The truck stoped for him and he get inside.

"oh hello kid,what too you so far in a lonley desert?",said the truck driver.

"my ma,she is having malnutrition and i have to go to the hospital"

"They have the medicine in there",said the Kid

"oh i see,let me take you there",said the truck driver

So they got there and the kid quickly ran to the doctor and asked for the medicine.

Meanwhile.. His mother is already almost dying on the chair.And she prayed.

Then the son gets the medicine and gets back home with the kind helpful truck driver,And he reached home.

"M..M...Ma!",cried the son

He kept crying and the driver felt sorry for him

The mom left a letter saying 'Son,my time has come but don't be afraid for God is still with you everywhere you go. I love you son.'

After reading it he gaved the medicine to his friend who is having the same sickness and he live's his life with God's grace.

THE END

Second Draft:

One day there is a family that was having maluration.
There is a boy in that family,who is searching for wheat or any food to feed his mom.His mom is having malnurition in Somolia.

Everytime the son is hungry the mother always gave some propotion of her food.Then one day she got that sickness. They need to find the antedope for that sickness in a camp hospital.The mom said that if she died he have to give it to another people having that same type of sickness.Then the boy went out to find it.

It was miles until evening he rested at a place and found chickens! So he too one and cook it since there was wood to burn.At the morning he saw a truck driver."Hey,please stop!" said the boy.
The truck stoped and hhe got inside."What got you so far?"Asked the driver.
"My mom,she is having malnutriton and I have to get to the camp hospital." The boy said.


They talked until they reached to the hospital. Then the boy ran off and quickly asked the doctor.
"Doctor,is there any antedope for malnutrition?"He said.
"yes,here".said the doctor as he pulls the antedope from his bag.
Then the boy got back to the truk and they got back home.The truck driver was very kind and helpful.

When they got back home,the mom passed away.And he read the letter saying 'Son,its my time to die.Thankyou for every thing...' Then as he cried reading it he gave the antedopeit to his camp mate That is also having the similar sickness nar him.

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